I have cut the project to get rid of the fade between shots in our film. Today I also found sound and created it on garage band for our project. I done this by finding sound tracks online from website such as Youtube and converted them to itunes. I then dragged the sounds over the film and created it to go with the film and what was happening. For example the footsteps i tried to sync with the actors walking whilst purposely adding other footsteps to show someone else was there creating diegetic sounds throughout the clip. I feel I have improved and moved forward by doing this and will carry on until completed. The editing and colour grading also needs to be completed and we also need to add our last bit of footage and location. I would grade my work this a high level 2/ low level 3 as i haven't yet completed the second half of the clip however i will go and complete soon.
A very strong location and choice of actors. You need to use a close up when the bag is dropped and again when M picks this bag up. We also need to have a ECU on the watch from his perspective whth the sencond hand ticking. You can do this by having M in the same costuem and just find a similar colour/texture floor.
There is a big continuity error when he walks to the left through the door, then emerges on the left walking towards the right. You could fix this with a cut away to the other mysterious character or maybe a shot from the CCTV?
A much improved effort, However we need to get another 30 seconds or so of footage. I would recommend you use this as a series of images that relate to the story to have as a backdrop for the title slates. You must put in the extra tome after school - this has a lot of potenial to get B if the titles and sound are strong - but you are working too slowly and will not have enough time just in lessons to get this finished by deadline.
A very strong location and choice of actors. You need to use a close up when the bag is dropped and again when M picks this bag up. We also need to have a ECU on the watch from his perspective whth the sencond hand ticking. You can do this by having M in the same costuem and just find a similar colour/texture floor.
ReplyDeleteThere is a big continuity error when he walks to the left through the door, then emerges on the left walking towards the right. You could fix this with a cut away to the other mysterious character or maybe a shot from the CCTV?
A much improved effort, However we need to get another 30 seconds or so of footage. I would recommend you use this as a series of images that relate to the story to have as a backdrop for the title slates. You must put in the extra tome after school - this has a lot of potenial to get B if the titles and sound are strong - but you are working too slowly and will not have enough time just in lessons to get this finished by deadline.
WT C